timeless_tales ([info]timeless_tales) wrote,
@ 2005-09-15 21:52:00
Previous Entry  Add to memories!  Tell a Friend!  Next Entry
Current mood:accomplished

{Naruto Ficlet} A Friendship For Eternity 1/1

Author: Kiya Sama
Fandom: Naruto
Title: A Friendship For Eternity
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Sap/Angst? :(
Notes: A picture story done in Sasuke's POV. I had to rummage through several episodes to get the shots and I'm definitely no expert at this, but I thought I'd give this a try instead of subjecting you all to my stick fanart again. *fufufu*
Enjoy! And know that feedback is greatly appreciated! ^_^








It’s a rather stupid assignment…
To write about my closest friend
He says it’s a way for us to become better teammates
I say it’s a load of bullshit

But I must think of the right words to say
Be conscious of how I plan to put this in writing…



How ironic that the first image to come to my mind is none other than you:



How anyone like you can stand there and brag about becoming the best Hokage ever is beyond me.

And yet I look into your eyes:



And wonder why I believe you can really do it.



You keep chasing me…



…needing to be as strong as me…



…wanting to best me in everything…



You infuriate me…
…and yet leave me flustered and confused at times.



I wish I could get rid of you.
Simply ignore you.

But the collages of my memory



…remind me of just why I ‘died’ for you.



The warmth of your arms made me happy
Yes, I did feel it and wished to remain that way for as long as I could.



But I fear that you are beginning to surpass me.
I see it in your eyes and I worry that I will never measure up.

I don’t know what the future holds for us
For perhaps a day will come
When I will betray you…
When you will hate me and wish I had never existed



I wonder…
What will become of us then, Naruto?

For even though I will never say these words out loud…
Your smile and your kindness…



…will always be cherished within my heart…



For you truly are and will always be…
My closest and most precious friend…



…forever…
















Page 1 of 2
<<[1] [2] >>

(Post a new comment)


[info]fanfare
2005-09-15 07:24 pm UTC (link)
Aw... normally I dislike SasuNaru...

but that was so SWEET. AWW.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 03:35 am UTC (link)
*grin* Thanks so much for reading and the feedback! XD

(Reply to this) (Parent)

(no subject) - [info]jindaime, 2005-09-16 06:12 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]timeless_tales, 2005-09-16 01:30 pm UTC

[info]itoshii_chan
2005-09-15 07:45 pm UTC (link)
O__O

T___T

*sniff**clutches Kiya-sama's hand* T~that... *sniff* ... wa~was so~oo... *sniff* ... beau~beautiful ...

*sniff* I wo~on't cry~y...

*sniff* I WON'T!

*sniff* I w~wo~o... I... *sniff sniff*

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!

*blow nose*

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 03:36 am UTC (link)
Awwww *cries along with you*
Didn't mean to make it so angsty but *sniff* It really is kinda sad the way things have gone between them, ne?
Thanks so much for the feedback! *huggles*

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

(no subject) - [info]kirikou_yuki, 2005-09-16 06:13 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]timeless_tales, 2005-09-16 01:25 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]kirikou_yuki, 2005-09-16 01:55 pm UTC

[info]megumihihitori
2005-09-15 07:48 pm UTC (link)
O___O Oh my goodness... How very beautiful and touching and and and.... *Cries with itoshii_chan*

;_; That was so beautiful.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 03:37 am UTC (link)
*huggles* Thank you for reading and your comment! ^_____^
I'm glad you enjoyed it (even though it was that sad.)

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]kary_no_baka
2005-09-15 07:49 pm UTC (link)
....... so..... sweet.... and.... T^T!!!!!!!!!! *goes all mushy*

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 03:37 am UTC (link)
*g* Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it! XDD

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]tsuzuki_hana
2005-09-15 08:06 pm UTC (link)
That could be taken many ways... but it was sweet and kinda cute. ^_^

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 03:39 am UTC (link)
Hehehe, I guess it's been left up to the reader's interpretation. *grin* Thanks so much for reading and the feedback! I really appreciate it! ^_^

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]misterbubbles87
2005-09-15 09:57 pm UTC (link)
Wow. That was beautiful. And I'm not into slash, either. But THAT... just wow. *applause*

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 03:40 am UTC (link)
*bows gratefully* Thank you!! That makes me feel really happy! XDD

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]xiaobai7988
2005-09-15 10:15 pm UTC (link)
T__________________T This is so sad. I love the words. I really do. T___T

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 03:41 am UTC (link)
*bows gratefully* And thank you for reading! XDD I really appreciate the comment!

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]mysty_tyger
2005-09-15 11:26 pm UTC (link)
Waaaaaaaaaah!! That was so sweet, and touching! ;__;
*sniffle*

(Really well done! ^^)

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 03:42 am UTC (link)
Thank you for the feedback! *huggles* Their relationship just screams angst! angst! angst! all the way, doesn't it? *lol*

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]kamikazekage
2005-09-16 12:51 am UTC (link)
Great introspection piece, the screencaps were an excellent addition!! ^^

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 03:44 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much for the feedback! XDDD Just remind me never to do this again *lol*

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]furu_yuki
2005-09-16 01:56 am UTC (link)
I...loved it. Wow. It's so sweet; and it could be interpreted platonically or romantically, although of course I took it romantically. Ehehe. ^^ So beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 03:45 am UTC (link)
Of course it's romantic because we all really know that Sasuke wants Naruto! And thank you for reading! *bows gratefully* I'm really glad you enjoyed it! XDD

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]sassyuke
2005-09-16 04:45 am UTC (link)
Very beautiful! *almost crying*

You made me cry in a public library! T.T Thank you!

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 01:25 pm UTC (link)
*lol* Sorry for making you cry in public but thanks so much for reading and for the great feedback! XDD I really do appreciate it!

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]ly_mizukage
2005-09-16 06:12 am UTC (link)
I love it soo muuch ;_;

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 01:26 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for reading! XD
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]pyroclastica
2005-09-16 06:13 am UTC (link)
That was cute on so many levels. ♥

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 01:26 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! *lol* Your icon is teh cute! ^______^

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]shatteredtenshi
2005-09-16 12:31 pm UTC (link)
Suteki na! Kawaii'su! Those screencaps were a really nice touch! ^^

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 01:27 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much! Took me a while to get them all together but I'm glad it turned out all right. *grins*

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]kuraikage
2005-09-16 12:36 pm UTC (link)
I think Sasuke-kun needs a hug.

Seriously.

:D This was so cute though! I was about to die from the cute sappy angst~ <3

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 01:27 pm UTC (link)
Sasuke needs LOTS of hugs! *lol* And if all the fangirls in the world gave it to him.........I think he'd need to go into some serious therapy or something. XDD
Thanks so much for reading!

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]misty_writes
2005-09-16 01:46 pm UTC (link)
THAT WAS SO FARKING CUTE! I loved it so much. This is such a neat and unique idea! Wonderful, wonderful job. Many kisses to you. This was beautiful beyond words.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 04:08 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much for the feedback! *huggles* I'm glad you enjoyed it that much! XDD

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]wigglynoodle
2005-09-16 03:33 pm UTC (link)
Ooh, pictures. It was a great idea to use them!

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 04:11 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I just decided to do something a wee bit different this time around. *lol* Glad you liked it! XDD

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]applepiefilling
2005-09-16 05:40 pm UTC (link)
the pics are <3 to the max. that was so cute!

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-16 06:32 pm UTC (link)
*grins* Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^______________^

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]unagieater
2005-09-17 12:01 am UTC (link)
this was so beautiful. great choice of images, perfectly accompanied by words. i'm saving this to my memories ^_^!

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-17 06:17 am UTC (link)
*bows gratefully* Thank you so much for the feedback/comments! It was fun to write and create and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! XDDD

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]kathla
2005-09-17 07:20 am UTC (link)
^^' I don't like SasuNaru all that much, but this was just cool! :3 I love your choice of words for this! :D

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-17 01:15 pm UTC (link)
You don't like SasuNaru???? Why's that? *lol* I guess I'm trying to turn you into a fan of that pairing, but anyway, I'm glad you still enjoyed it! *huggles* Thanks for the feedback! XD

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

(no subject) - [info]kathla, 2005-09-17 01:59 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]timeless_tales, 2005-09-17 05:50 pm UTC

[info]kanika_ishtar
2005-09-17 01:11 pm UTC (link)
This is beautiful! And adding the screencaps was amazing idea. Now you made me start to cry...T.T

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]kiyasama
2005-09-17 01:15 pm UTC (link)
*grins* Thanks so much for the feedback! Didn't mean to make you cry and all but....XDD

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

(no subject) - [info]kanika_ishtar, 2005-09-17 02:11 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]kiyasama, 2005-09-17 05:51 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]kanika_ishtar, 2005-09-17 05:58 pm UTC

[info]azamaria_chan
2005-09-17 08:34 pm UTC (link)
AWWWW... The last images really hit home. *cries* That was so... *sniff* I wonder a lil about the "assignment" but other than that, I thought this was nicely done. Great job! :D

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-17 09:02 pm UTC (link)
*bows gratefully* Wheee! Glad you liked it! XD As for the assignment part...it's basically Kakashi telling them to write something about their teammates. *grins* XDD

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]sasunaru_ai
2005-09-18 03:45 am UTC (link)
T.T *cries with everyone else and cuddles Sasuke and Naruto dolls* WHAAAAAA!!! I just...i can't...it was...just so...*breaks into sobs* Beautiful! *hands Kiya-chan her own Sasuke and Naruto plushies* very nice *walks off crying*

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-18 07:02 am UTC (link)
Awww thank you for the plushies!! *squishes them* I'm so glad you enjoyed the little piece. It was definitely fun to write/create! *huggles* Thank you for the feedback! XDD

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)

(no subject) - [info]sasunaru_ai, 2005-09-18 04:48 pm UTC

[info]xxeminaxx
2005-09-18 04:25 am UTC (link)
*joins in with the crying* Omg... I love SasuNaru, so this was so beautiful to me. T_T it was so heartfelt, and without OOCness too... and true feat, indeed.

I loved it so much. ^^

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-18 07:06 am UTC (link)
Thank you! *bows gratefully* I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Saying it's IC makes me so happy *lol* I tried not to make it too sappy or anything. Thanks so much again for the feedback! *huggles* I really do appreciate it!

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]luthorlover
2005-09-19 06:02 am UTC (link)
I seriously just got teary-eyed while reading that. It was really beautiful, and perfectly Sasuke.

xoxo,
Monica ^_^

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]timeless_tales
2005-09-19 04:28 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much for reading! *huggles* I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^_____^

(Reply to this) (Parent)


Page 1 of 2
<<[1] [2] >>

Create an Account
Forgot your login or password?
Login w/ OpenID
English • Español • Deutsch • Русский…